Douglas Adams Continuum (DAC)

I started a book which is my personal sequel to mostly harmless. Now no more books will be coming out, ill just have to try myself. I'm only 11 so its not the best so pls comment and provide help if possible.

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Chapter 1
The world is a very unusual place.
The universe in which it inhabits is even more unusual than it.
The people who inhabit both are so unusual that the world and universe seem unusually normal.

The Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy’s entry for ‘What’s Up with the Universe today?â€

Excellent stuff for an Eleven-year old. If I ever get around to putting the finishing touches on my own dubious sequel (just a couple of chaps to go) I'll let you know.

I would suggest stringing the chapters together. Douglas was infinitely capable of the brief chapter, but he never waxed terse. The perspective hops too frantically for a solid narrative perspective to take hold. Try expanding a few chapters, perhaps.

Keep writing (and try your hand at something original as well. Fine fanfiction often equates a superior imagination).

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